This is my moment in time from my school holaday its all about me at my dads work when i was sliding down a pile on my tume its so fun to but its very mesy.
Kia ora, I am a student at Belfast School, Welcome - Haere Mai. This is a place where I will be able to share my learning with you. Please note my work may include spelling or other errors because some of it will be my first drafts. I would like to get your feedback - comments, thoughts, questions and ideas to help me Learn Create Share and Grow.
Monday, October 18, 2021
4 comments:
To support my learning I ask you to comment as follows:
1. Something positive - Begin with a greeting. Talk about something you like about what I have shared.
2. Thoughtful - A comment that will mean something to me to let me know you read/watched or listened to what I had to say. - use any language.
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Hi Maddison your writing is descriptive and informative. Maybe next time you could work on your grammar.
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ReplyDeleteHi Maddison,
ReplyDeleteI really liked the way you described the things going on around you. Maybe next time you could work on your handwriting.
From Devanshi at New Windsor School
Hello Maddison! I really like the way when you put " Moment In time By maddison" It looked like that your a very good writer! Really love it!
ReplyDeleteKeep the Good work up! :)
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Skye,
Room 11
New Windsor School