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Monday, October 18, 2021

A moment in time

 

This is my moment in time from my school holaday its all about me at my dads work when i was sliding down a pile on my tume its so fun to but its very mesy.

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6 comments:

  1. AnonymousNovember 23, 2021 at 9:40 AM

    Hi Maddison your writing is descriptive and informative. Maybe next time you could work on your grammar.

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  2. AnonymousNovember 23, 2021 at 9:42 AM

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  3. AnonymousNovember 23, 2021 at 9:46 AM

    Hi Maddison,
    I really liked the way you described the things going on around you. Maybe next time you could work on your handwriting.

    From Devanshi at New Windsor School

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    1. MaddieNovember 23, 2021 at 11:39 AM

      yea i've never relly bean good at handwriting

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  4. AnonymousDecember 6, 2021 at 11:21 AM

    Hello Maddison! I really like the way when you put " Moment In time By maddison" It looked like that your a very good writer! Really love it!
    Keep the Good work up! :)

    From
    Skye,

    Room 11
    New Windsor School

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