Kia ora, I am a student at Belfast School, Welcome - Haere Mai. This is a place where I will be able to share my learning with you. Please note my work may include spelling or other errors because some of it will be my first drafts. I would like to get your feedback - comments, thoughts, questions and ideas to help me Learn Create Share and Grow.
Tuesday, April 13, 2021
5 sentence story
This is a story we had to write about a boy named Manu and we can us only 5 sentence it was really fun.
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Fantastic 5 sentence story Maddie. You summarised the original story really well with just these few sentences. You used punctuation accurately, we might just need to have a look at different tenses - past and present - so you get this right. After looking at some other stories do you think you would have liked to have used colour or images in your published work? Keep up the wonderful writing Maddie!
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