Tuesday, May 5, 2020
Settlement on Mars- Part 2
Describe it I found something green and creepy. it was kinda slimy it's tail had scales on it and 1 gaint eye but it was a cute eye. we went to investigate what made the strange sound coming from inside. it was green and creepy i think I will call it thing. it was geting late so me and the monsters went back to their house and went to sleep. In the moning we went back to the space ship and we got a cag good thing I brought that. so then we went back to the space ship and then we caught the thing and we brought the thing back to my ship to be continued.........
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Hi Maddie, I really like how you described your creature using both what you can see and hear. I could picture it in my mind. You have got me wondering what is going to happen next. I hope it is not scary!
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